Example #1:
One thing I should consider about going into this profession is that if I go to college and get a business degree and go to work, and actually find out that that's not the job for me. If running Feld Fire isn't what I want to do than all I’ll be left with is a business degree and nowhere to go. Most people who get a business degree and don't have money to go back to college end up managing a Mcdonald’s. This is one of the reasons I think this job shadow is a good idea because if I do find out its not for me i’m going to be stuck in a hole.
Revised:
One thing I should consider about going into this profession is that if I go to college and get a business degree and go to work, and actually find out that that's not the job for me. If running Feld Fire isn't what I want to do than all I’ll be left with is a business degree and nowhere to go. Most people who get a business degree and don't have money to go back to college end up managing a Mcdonald’s. This is one of the reasons I think this job shadow is a good idea because if I do find out its not for me i’m going to be stuck in a hole.
Example #2:
Revised
One thing I should consider about going into this profession is that if I go to college and get a business degree and go to work, and actually find out that that's not the job for me. If running Feld Fire isn't what I want to do than all I’ll be left with is a business degree and nowhere to go. Most people who get a business degree and don't have money to go back to college end up managing a Mcdonald’s. This is one of the reasons I think this job shadow is a good idea because if I do find out its not for me i’m going to be stuck in a hole.
Revised:
One thing I should consider about going into this profession is that if I go to college and get a business degree and go to work, and actually find out that that's not the job for me. If running Feld Fire isn't what I want to do than all I’ll be left with is a business degree and nowhere to go. Most people who get a business degree and don't have money to go back to college end up managing a Mcdonald’s. This is one of the reasons I think this job shadow is a good idea because if I do find out its not for me i’m going to be stuck in a hole.
Example #2:
Revised