Word choice is the the difference between success and failure. It is the determining factor to whether you get the job or the next the guy does. It’s what will sell the products. It’s what gets you to the top. If you can talk, and do it well, you can succeed. People say, “It not what you say, it’s how you say it.” And I agree with that, but it’s hard to make stupid words sound smart. Word choice is everything.
Example #1:
On a daily basis, I will have to be at work by 7:00 and won't be able to get home until 5:30 6:00. During the day My job will to go through all the emails I receive, and the average emails I would receive would be approximately 150. Phone calls is another priority, I will get an endless amount of calls from people all over the world. Because this is a worldwide business one of my main priorities would be to recognize and keep terrorists from buying any dangerous supplies.
Revised:
On a daily basis, I will have to be at work by 7:00 and won't be able to get home until 5:30 6:00. During the day My job will to go through all the emails I receive, and the average emails I would receive would be approximately 150. Phone calls is another priority, I will get an endless amount of calls from people all over the world. Because this is a worldwide business one of my main priorities would be to recognize and keep terrorists from buying any dangerous supplies.
Example #2
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Example #1:
On a daily basis, I will have to be at work by 7:00 and won't be able to get home until 5:30 6:00. During the day My job will to go through all the emails I receive, and the average emails I would receive would be approximately 150. Phone calls is another priority, I will get an endless amount of calls from people all over the world. Because this is a worldwide business one of my main priorities would be to recognize and keep terrorists from buying any dangerous supplies.
Revised:
On a daily basis, I will have to be at work by 7:00 and won't be able to get home until 5:30 6:00. During the day My job will to go through all the emails I receive, and the average emails I would receive would be approximately 150. Phone calls is another priority, I will get an endless amount of calls from people all over the world. Because this is a worldwide business one of my main priorities would be to recognize and keep terrorists from buying any dangerous supplies.
Example #2
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